A Person Who Has Made a Difference: Al Gore
Al Gore has changed the environmental problems in many ways. Now, the world faces serious problems about globe warming, Al Gore promotes some perspectives in order to reduce the disaster. First, he finds the cigarette manufacturers lead to serious pollutions, because of the company makes a lot of poison gas, it brings about a hole in ozone layer. Therefore, he refers to the public; the whole world citizens all try to find new ways to solve the crisis.
Al Gore is not only an environmentalist but also a politician, he serves in congressional for many years, moreover, he attended presidential election in 1988 and 2000, he has the quite rich political experience, he gives everybody a good impression, his accomplishments are popular with others, if you want to more understand about Al Gore's live story you can enter the website. Here has more information.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Al_Gore.
The most important thing is Al Gore gets Nobel Prize with the intergovemmental Panel on Climate Change in 2007. The prize devotes much attention to the globe warming.
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Hi, I am Rachel. Your writint is great. But you still made some mistakes in your writing.
"Now, the world faces serious problems about globe warming, Al Gore promotes some perspectives in order to reduce the disaster."--- "Now, the world faces serious problems about globe warming, and Al Gore promotes some perspectives in order to reduce the disaster." You should go to see "Sentence Punctuation Patterns".
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/604/01/
"Al Gore is not only an environmentalist but also a politician, he serves in congressional for many years, moreover, he attended presidential election in 1988 and 2000, he has the quite rich political experience, he gives everybody a good impression, his accomplishments are popular with others, if you want to more understand about Al Gore's live story you can enter the website."---"Al Gore is not only an environmentalist but also a politician. He serves in congressional for many years, moreover, he attended presidential election in 1988 and 2000. He has the quite rich political experience. He gives everybody a good impression. His accomplishments are popular with others. If you want to more understand about Al Gore's live story you can enter the website." you should have a look on "Sentence Punctuation Patterns, Pattern Two: Compound Sentence".
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/604/01/
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